Sweet Ace

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  • Family

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    For my son's friend and his family whose children are like my own. I love you very much!

    Sweet Ace

     My heart is hurting I saw the results, an accident so tragic the neighborhood hurts. His mom didn't see him, Toddlers are to fast and your life  has been taken so short.
    My son is his brothers best friend and teenagers put up a front but their heart is hurting and I feel like I can't help. I have tried to think what else could I do But what do you say? what do you do? I held his momma while she cried, his brother and sisters stayed by our side.
    Life is to fast and sometimes taken to short so as my heart is hurting I must say Rest in Peace my Sweet little Ace.
    You are with angels now,Wven though you were always an angel  Now you have wings. Rest in Peace my Sweet little Ace

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    justastar2 commented on Sweet Ace

    10-12-2009

    Misty this was so sad and such an emotional poem. You need a period before But what do you say? Caps on What do you do? and in the last paragraph you need E instead of W on Even though you were always an angel. End with a period here, and a period at the end after Ace. Great imagery!
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    dustyrebel70

    10/30/2009

    Sorry I wasn't thinking just writing my feelings at the time because what I have seen. I was upset sorry mom

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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