Life ungranted


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Encouragement for all of those who are thinking about suicide

Life ungranted

Eyes shinging in the dark
a hint of jasmine in the park
Stronger love never shown
the love gone by and never known

Arms of strenght lifting in the air
a child's laughter without a care
darkness will not come in the light
A large mallard taking flight

Angels faces are glowing
Gods grace is all knowing
Babies faces shining bright
wanting to make you go into the light

Today is a brand new life
so please go and put down that knife
Life is short enough as most people well know
let all your anger melt into that white snow

Tomorrow the future is so bright
and the the galaxy is everyone's next flight

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Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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