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Rest in Peace my favorite dancer


You danced your way into our lives so sexy and so new.
We watched you kick the road house moves.
You were an adonis, a man of many talents.
Sexy to a tee and sweet as you could be.
You taught a generation how to move
and express themselves with a dance
Today you might have lost your fight but I hope you realize that as of tonight.
You are dancing with the stars above and have become a man among the ranks
With the Duke, Costner and Sir Connery a knight
We will miss you Mr. Dirty Dancing man
Rest in Peace and dance your way upon the stars
Your face will be forever etched in our hearts
Your pain is now gone and the angels are singing
For Patrick Swayze is in heaven now Dancing

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justastar2 commented on Swayze


This is a beautiful tribute to a great man, your imagery and flow are good. Thanks for sharing your heartfelt thoughts.

CasimirJash commented on Swayze


RIP Patrick Swayze, gone to soon, nice poem, well wriiten and put together

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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