Eighteen and stupid


  • Angst
  • ,
  • Family

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    for my step sis who is just stupid at 18

    Eighteen and stupid

    Eighteen is such a troubling age
    you think you know everything
    but you know nothing
    you want freedom
    you want to do your own thing
    but you can't handle your life yet

    Your making stupid mistakes
    and driving me insane
    Since you don't want to listen
    and think the married man is for you
    Go, see what happens I dare you!

    Eighteen comes only once
    and I hope you will someday realize
    I was right

    No I don't hate you
    I am only ashamed
    that you can't listen
    and learn before it's too late

    Your big sis cares
    and will always worry about you
    but go ahead and do whatever it is
    that you want to.

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    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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