Sleeplessness

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    Sleeplessness

    Sleeping Beauty am I not
    Tired hands shake a lot
    Eyes of red, tears of a dream
    Telling my brain not to scream
    Brain surrender to this dream
    So I can understand this foolish theme
    Silly jabber is what I hear
    as this brain is in full gear.

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    laydbak1 commented on Sleeplessness

    06-20-2009

    This appears to be either a short sequel to or, perhaps a post script of the insomnia piece... I'm still wanting for the demon personified in some way and a hero come out of it somehow.. Short, but to the point..
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    dustyrebel70

    06/21/2009

    actually I wrote this one first. If I can't sleep sometimes I write what is in my head. There is no demons or heros, just my feelings

    jademelissa74 commented on Sleeplessness

    06-18-2009

    Interesting interpretation! Another well-written poem. I like the arrangement of simple phrases into a short, powerful poem. Great Job! God bless! :))
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    thoughtsaflame commented on Sleeplessness

    05-28-2009

    This is something I can mosy certainly identify with. Is there no rest for the weary?? This screams the feelings of every insomniac alive. Great write. Thanks for sharing.
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