Blue Moon

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    Blue Moon

     

    Blue moon are you there?
    Sometimes I wish someone would care
    Blue moon will you shine a little brighter
    So that I may have some hope of something kinder
    Blue moon will you work you magical whims
    and give me a spell to create a mystical gem
    Blue moon are you prepared?
    To create a world not full of so much despair
    Blue moon can I sit on your surface
    So that I don't feel so worthless

     

     

     

     

     

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    laydbak1 commented on Blue Moon

    06-20-2009

    I read this 3 times... I see the BS acrostically led verse lines, except near the end... Beyond the reoccurring reference to the blue moon, I can't find any commonality to the purpose here, except that perhaps, it's a tale of general, personal frustration with the sadness of the world... This voice appears to be speaking to God, or the Great Spirits pleading for help from the world's woes.... But, then again, I'm sure you know...

    dustyrebel70

    06/21/2009

    I wrote it when I was depressed if that helps.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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