Other side


  • Death

    Other side

    A week of sadness has come and gone
    Not Knowing what went wrong
    they were flying in the sky
    what happens when they reach the other side
    two twenty eight is the number
    how many souls will stay up under
    I ask myself is there a way
    theses trouble souls will come back some day
    What happens to these troubled souls
    will gods magical hand create a new fold
    Crashes happen throught the years
    many families have cried their tears
    Life is eternal in my eyes and losing someone is just so hard
    But imagine them up there playing a new deck of cards
    Life moves on and then we die
    I still wonder what happens on the other side

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    laydbak1 commented on Other side


    I liked this read.... Sort of lost me in the far side a couple of times, but overall I really enjoyed it... Especially, the question posed, almost innocently, in the last line... The other side will always be a thing of ponderance to humans... No one has ever made it back to tell the story.... A good write...

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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