Spiritual Wind

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    Spiritual Wind

    Spirtual wind in my hair
    wishing you were still here
    Braves were riding on their steeds
    Feeling their villages hungry need

    Spiritual wind in my eyes
    commanding me to the other side
    Ponies galloping in the wind
    Geronimo's braves are here again
    Spiritual wind in my ears
    watching buffalo with my dear
    Spirtual wind in my face
    take me away to that heavenly place.

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    justastar2 commented on Spiritual Wind

    06-07-2009

    Excellant poem with good imagery and flow, must have been a good dream, you captured the Indian braves and made them spiritual.

    dustyrebel70

    06/10/2009

    wasn't really a dream just a floating thought of the past, you know how I like Indians.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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