Hate And Anger In My Veins

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With this, I wasn't concerned with giving this a good subject or even a clear direction, as much as I was just experimenting with the theme of an all-consuming beast of hate, anger, and vengeance. I may write something better later, but I'm not a very writer of such subjects, being more melancholic than vengeful. Enjoy the piece for what it's worth though.

Hate And Anger In My Veins

Hate and anger coursing through my veins
Your vilest of venoms are driving me insane
Soon, none of my former self remains
Thanks to the needle in my arm I call 'pain'

Why did you try to defile all that I wanted?
You knew that this is what I'd become
An awful monster whose rage is acrid
With only darkness in his heart's chasm

I want my vengeance and your suffering
You will pay for the damage you've dealt
For it is with you alone I'm warring
And I won't stop until your bones melt

Why such a strong abhorrence you ask?
Because you've caused so much misery
You spread it freely while under your mask
Killing all that is, was precious to me

So, now I'm plotting your terrible demise
I guarantee you'll get what you deserve
For you, it should come as quite a surprise
When I'm done, there's none of you I'd preserve

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ApaqRasgirl commented on Hate And Anger In My Veins

08-21-2010

that was some very strong emotions in this write dear.......you may say you are not that good and this type but you hit this one well......you say your more melancholic I'll bet you could write good ones about nature.......great read dear........thanks.....love asha

Rhymer commented on Hate And Anger In My Veins

08-21-2010

I like the dark writes, you bring hatred and vengence to the forefront allowing the reader to bask in the writers feelings. 10

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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