I Am Me

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Okay, so I don't normally write poems like this. I was in school at the hospital (no one freak, it was routine stuff), and the teacher approached me. Every year, we do a project involving all the students. Most of us are cancer kids (I'm not so lucky (seriously, I wish I had cancer over what i have. If you must ask, please email me, don't leave it in a comment)...anyway, most of us are cancer kids, so we all get to know each other. This year we are doing something with poems, so I said what the heck. She had a sheet with lines on it. Each line started out with I am... or I think... , etc. I tend to do more rhyming things, so I thought this would be a nice change.
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FUBAR93

I Am Me

I Am Me

 

 

I am a sarcastic and pensive young woman

                                                                   

I wonder about what will happen in my future

 

I hear the whistle of the midnight train

 

I see the trees swaying in the bitter cold breeze

 

I want with all my being to be somewhere, anywhere else

 

I am a sarcastic and pensive young woman

 

 

 

I pretend that I am a different me

 

I feel like I am a heroine in a grocery store novel

 

I touch the blistery scar of the port catheter under my skin

 

I worry about so many things and yet nothing at all

 

I cry often when I think about the hand I’ve been dealt in the poker game of life

 

I am a sarcastic and pensive young woman

 

 

 

 

I understand what you’re saying when you don’t make sense

 

I say things without thinking if they make sense

 

I dream my gargantuan dreams only I can dream

 

I try to reach among the stars, and fall somewhere beyond

 

I hope to enjoy my life as it is

 

I am a sarcastic and pensive young woman

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LoveDeeply commented on I Am Me

06-28-2010

Poetic Justice, Yeah. Keep it flowing :) I loves it.

JayJ420 commented on I Am Me

06-06-2010

just like poetic justice.....keep your head up and eyes forward....

themommyof2 commented on I Am Me

12-07-2009

That is a very well worded piece about how much life can push you down, but you remain fighting to stand up. Shows the emotions and confusion that many have to live with.

nonners commented on I Am Me

11-12-2009

wow-you are talented yong gal. great read. well writtin. reminds me of..me

Artie commented on I Am Me

10-22-2009

Nice piece - It shows your struggles, but most importantly, it shows your beautiful spirit. 10 from me

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

FUBAR93’s Poems (26)

Title Comments
Title Comments
It's In The Air 1
Just Another Poem About Me 2
Do I Regret You? 10
Ponderation 7
Caveat Emptor 17
Against the Current 8
The Woman Who Stares at Goats 9
Eyes Wide Shut 10
Lullaby 7
20 Things You Don't Know About Me 2
Ring of Fire 2
The End to Come 13
Resurrection 6
My Second Home 2
Q & A 7
Gun, Hat, and Boots 4
I Am Me 5
Poem 4
Sonny 6
Don't Be a Pedophile 13
Dad and I 4
Underneath 14
You Don't Know Me 19
Marshmallows=
Happiness
12
4 O'Clock Sharp 12
Leaves 14