Ring of Fire


  • Love

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    So, Dave89 and I colabed and did this one night cuz we were bored. Hope y'all like it!

    Ring of Fire

    DAVE: Underneath the starlit skies, I see the love in your eyes
              I know that you really care, you take away my darkest fears

    ME:    My love as deep as rivers flow, 
             as warm as fire embers glow

    DAVE: We will watch our love glow,
             They will see and we will know
             our perfect fire embers glow

    ME:    The flame of love shall never die,
             fed by the desire of you and I

    DAVE: Our days will turn to years you see,
             forever will be you and me

    ME:    Our endless love lasts in our hearts, 
             the two of us still staying strong.
             rich or poor, in sickness and health, 
             nothing can tear us two apart.

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    LadyLuck commented on Ring of Fire


    Love it. A beautiful poem of how bright a love can be and burn. 10

    EthanEdward commented on Ring of Fire


    Sounds like true love to me. I hope it works out better than mine.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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