Eyes Wide Shut

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Eyes Wide Shut


you look around with your eyes wide shut,
and listen with your hands on your ears.
The world is revolving around you, but
you can focus on nothing but the pain and tears.
You wish all your worries would just float away,
you wish things were simpler, more honest and real.
You keep your thoughts in, let nothing betray,
what's on the inside, the storm that you feel.
A mixture of feelings, from anger to sorrow,
a monsoon of emotions, pounding the dam.
You think you can't last to another tomorrow,
but you trudge through heartache to find that you can.
Why you keep doing it, day after day
is the only reason you stay alive
something compels you to stay
to work toward happiness, to try and survive.
so you trudge forward, one foot at a time
and keep on keeping on, don't stop
you get up the mountain at a steady climb
then you succeed, make it to the top.

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wamomo commented on Eyes Wide Shut

10-18-2010

This is a great poem, Fu!!! Love the tenacity and determination you portray. Giving up is never and option! Way to go, girl!!

nanoboy909 commented on Eyes Wide Shut

10-18-2010

wow this ones a great piece of work Fubar. i like it, it show emotion to another aspect....it's real.....good write keep it up.....

labitch commented on Eyes Wide Shut

10-12-2010

I really enjoyed this, fubar! How I feel every day, lately! except 4 the last 2 lines They're great, but stillwaiting for that payoff, myself. Great job!

LoveDeeply commented on Eyes Wide Shut

06-28-2010

I really like this Keep it up.and if you keep writing like this i'll def read more.

brokenhearted11 commented on Eyes Wide Shut

06-27-2010

yeah, it is hard to get the 50 characters, isnt it? bahaha. good write though, very ..... real. keep writing ! :)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Eyes Wide Shut 10
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