Underneath

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Underneath

All of me is not what is here,
there's more to me than meets the eye,
what is close may not be near,
but hiding with an alibi.
At first glance may seem the same,
normalcy with a different meaning,
to some and all life's just a game,
never pain or suffering, bleeding.
there are two sides to every story,
where there is light there's always dark,
where defeat tramps glory,
and two in one embark.
on a journey of a precious kind,
applied all throughout life,
from forward and behind,
i think this life will have to suffice.



Copyright 2007

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stever commented on Underneath

11-21-2009

yes this would make a good song..maybe needs a hook..as they say in the biz.

nonners commented on Underneath

11-12-2009

wow you are powerful. SERIOUSLY you are gifted-never lose this gift. okg im in awe

kmeadows commented on Underneath

06-22-2009

very very nice. I loved it. You were able to bring me in and keep me there. i found it interesting and thought provoking. Great job!

Richisfun commented on Underneath

06-15-2009

What is close may not be near, i love that, can i use it sometime? u are good and keep it up, i hope u save everything to word 2003-7 and save a good copy

mpjtforever commented on Underneath

06-12-2009

fantastic poem. you capture what i cant put down on paper. well written. I can feel your words. your friend jodi

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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