It's In The Air

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The title and poem say it all; It's finally summer (:

It's In The Air

The sun is shining, rays here to drown

The hybernation of winter, and with it the frowns.

The trees with their buds, starting anew,

Leaves at the ready to present their debut.

My soul is soaring as high as the birds,

My mind trying and failing to find words,

to describe the hope my spirit does hold,

the optimism of the season begins to enfold

Every woman, man, and child full of cheer,

for summertime is finally here.

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MrGee commented on It's In The Air

11-20-2011

Very nicely written. good use of rhymn and rhythmn in this work a 10

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

FUBAR93’s Poems (26)

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It's In The Air 1
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Ponderation 7
Caveat Emptor 17
Against the Current 8
The Woman Who Stares at Goats 9
Eyes Wide Shut 10
Lullaby 7
20 Things You Don't Know About Me 2
Ring of Fire 2
The End to Come 13
Resurrection 6
My Second Home 2
Q & A 7
Gun, Hat, and Boots 4
I Am Me 5
Poem 4
Sonny 6
Don't Be a Pedophile 13
Dad and I 4
Underneath 14
You Don't Know Me 19
Marshmallows=
Happiness
12
4 O'Clock Sharp 12
Leaves 14