I cant forget you

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    I cant forget you

    Everywhere I go, and everything I do, every face I see, keeps reminding me of you and me. 

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    ahardwalk commented on I cant forget you

    11-30-2010

    Its funny to me how short this poem is yet hits every feeling dead on!!!

    jesusfreake commented on I cant forget you

    02-03-2010

    for twenty words or less this is pretty astounding in the contents it contains...there is an emotion in here that I feel and although this poem is short the emotion is deep and I definitely feel it...doesnt take many words for u to express a feeling..i like that about ur poetry....

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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