I'M HURT

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  • Hurt

    I'M HURT

                                   I'M HURT!

    YOU DON'T CARE!!
                   

                YOUR NOT EVEN  
                 AWARE!!!

                  I'M HURT!!!!!



       


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    ahardwalk commented on I'M HURT

    11-27-2010

    I'm shocked how there are so few words here yet, you can feel every single one of them. Great poem!!
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    11/29/2010

    Thank you so much. Sometimes, I have a little doubt, because I am an emotional writer. Thank you so much for your positive encouraging comments...........E

    smoothdame commented on I'M HURT

    10-08-2010

    truer words were never spoken we often don't realize someone is hurting until it is too late, sometimes you have to make some noise.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/09/2010

    INDEED!!!!!! THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT SMOOTHDAME.

    shakeme4life commented on I'M HURT

    10-04-2010

    your hurt , how can i help , how can i stop it ... and still be fair .... almost a haiku
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/06/2010

    THANKS SIS. I KNOW LIKE ME YOU WANT TO HEAL ALL THE WOUNDS. THIS ONE WILL TAKE GOD'S TOUCH. LUV YA!

    SuperChick62 commented on I'M HURT

    10-04-2010

    It's definitely very clear as to the meaning. More like a painting... Anger and aggression described bluntly.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/04/2010

    Thank You SuperChick62. I try to be as clear as I can because that's the only real way to get people to understand. Thanks for your comment.

    Chaos128 commented on I'M HURT

    10-04-2010

    You make the frustration very clear, but the only way you'll ever get a compassionate response is if you tell the right people. True props to you. It took heart to write this.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/04/2010

    Thanks Chaos128. I appreciate your words and your comments. Your insight is beyond belief, Thanks for reading my work and commenting. ;-)

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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