YOU MOVE ME

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    My muse at work in my life.

    YOU MOVE ME

     YOU MOVE ME.
    YOU MOVE ME IN WAYS NO ONE CAN IMITATE.
    YOU MOVE ME IN WAYS THAT  I  APPRECIATE.
    TO BE WITH YOU, TO SPEND TIME WITH YOU,
    I CAN'T WAIT.
    ALL MY WANTS AND NEEDS ARE EMBODIED IN YOU.
    THE LOVE YOU PROVIDE IS EXCEPTIONAL.
    YOU MOVE ME.
    MOVE MY HEART AND MY SPIRIT.
    YOUR LOVING WORDS, I LOVE TO HEAR THEM.
    MOVE ME LIKE A MOVING TRAIN.
    YOUR LOVE GIVES ME MINIMAL PAIN.
    I LOVE WHEN YOU HOLD ME WHILE IT RAINS.
    YOU MOVE ME.
    THANK YOU FOR YOUR INSPIRATION.
    YOU CAUSE ME TO FEEL ELATION.
    I LOVE YOUR EYES.
    WHEN YOU LOOK AT ME, MY HEART SOARS TO THE SKIES.
             YOU MOVE ME
    TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY 1/22//11

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    Tarlton009 commented on YOU MOVE ME

    02-26-2014

    a movement that is so clearly welcomed and overwhelmingly unexpected or perhaps it is expected but that the move itself would be more than what is thought to be. Your passion is so evident and your words are simple but fantastic. thank you for this it is very good, keep it up :)
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    cheronld commented on YOU MOVE ME

    10-02-2011

    I so love the title.....it caught me and made me feel the words....I love the simple approach to it but with punch that set the pace for this lovely write....nicely done as usual my friend...Cher
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/06/2011

    Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.............E

    Knwldge commented on YOU MOVE ME

    10-01-2011

    Babygirl, u Knox this one outta the park, righteous kill
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/06/2011

    Thanks. I still have our co-write. I am working on making it cohesive and a little less graphic. Thanks for reading and commenting.................E

    smoothdame commented on YOU MOVE ME

    09-19-2011

    nicely done my friend I loved it. I loved the way you chose to rhyme but still stay true to the heart of the poem. Keep these poems coming.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/06/2011

    Thanks for reading and commenting. You know I am a fan and respect your opinion...............E

    Teardrops commented on YOU MOVE ME

    09-15-2011

    Well done my poet friend i loved it and you made goose bumps on my arms reading this Marie
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/06/2011

    I'm glad I could move you and make you feel. Thanks for reading and commenting..................E

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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    TO MY SON 8 01/09/2011
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    MY MELODY 14 12/10/2010
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    YOU GOT ME 6 12/10/2010
    SILKEN DREAMS 22 12/02/2010
    WORDS DON'T HURT 14 12/02/2010
    SEASONS 12 12/02/2010
    FIRESIDE CHAT 9 12/02/2010
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    DO YOU KNOW 13 11/22/2010
    LOVE IS COLORBLIND 9 11/22/2010
    I CHOOSE 8 11/22/2010
    CREATURE 12 11/08/2010
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    SEEING YOU 15 11/04/2010
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    I ACHE 2 10/14/2010
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    MY WATER 7 10/12/2010
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    FINE 8 10/10/2010
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