MY NIGHTMARE

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    LIFE SEPARATED FROM THE FANTASY.

    MY NIGHTMARE

     MY REALITY IS A NIGHTMARE.
       IT HAS GIVEN ME THE BIGGEST SCARE.
    I FEEL WORLD WEARY AND WORN LIKE I HAVE NOTHING TO SHARE.
        I WISH THIS FEELING I COULD SHAKE.
    ALL THE PEOPLE IN MY LIFE TRY TO GIVE AND NOT TAKE.
        STILL I FEEL, LIKE I AM IN A BAD DREAM FROM WHICH I CANNOT AWAKE.
        A WAKING NIGHTMARE IS THE WORST OF ALL, BECAUSE THERE IS NO            SUDDEN WAKENING AND THE REALIZATION THAT THE DREAM  WASN'T REAL AT ALL.

    MY REALITY IS A NIGHTMARE.

    IT HAS GIVEN ME THE BIGGEST SCARE.



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    djones commented on MY NIGHTMARE

    09-29-2010

    for real...i feel you on this.....................................................
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/01/2010

    Thank you. It's a good feeling to now that I'm not alone. ;-)

    shakeme4life commented on MY NIGHTMARE

    09-26-2010

    I hope and pray that this is from your imagination this write , it's is a nightmare living in this world...
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    09/27/2010

    Thank you so much! You are always in my prayers too. Just words that I had to get out. Write them out or act them out. I prefer to write.

    truth917 commented on MY NIGHTMARE

    09-26-2010

    This is to be very true and scary. Alot of things that we go through today in reality on show to be nightmares. A very intriguing write
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    09/27/2010

    Thank you LeKing. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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