WRONG

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    WRONG

     I'M WRONG.

    I KNOW THIS IS NOT HOW IT'S SUPPOSED TO GO.

    I LOOK IN THE MIRROR AND STARE AT A STRANGER.

    WHY DIDN'T I SEE THE WARNING SIGNS OF DANGER?

    HIS EYES LOOK THROUGH MY SOUL, PIERCING ME, MAKING ME WANT THINGS I SHOULD NOT.

    MAKING ME FEEL IN WAYS THAT I FORGOT.

    I KNOW THIS IS NOT LOVE, IT'S LUST.

    I KNOW HE DESERVES NONE OF MY TRUST.

    BUT.......HIS SMILE MAKES MY HEART BEAT FASTER, MAKES MY BREATH STOP.

    MAKES ME FEEL SO, SO GOOD AND YET NOT.

    WHAT AM I TO DO?

    A ROCK AND A HARD PLACE IS EASIER THAN THIS HELL I FACE.

    I WANT HIM, I KNOW I'M WRONG, BUT THESE FEELINGS ARE SO STRONG.

    HOW DO I FIGHT THEM?

    I SHOULD STAY AWAY, BUT HIS SMILE AND HIS KISS BECKON ME TO STAY.

    I KNOW I'M WRONG!

    I CAN'T CONTINUE THIS FOR LONG.

    THIS DESIRE WILL CRUSH AND HURT ME BECAUSE HE IS A MAN WHO EASILY DESERTS ME.

    I KNOW I'M WRONG BUT THESE FEELINGS ARE SO STRONG.

    I'M WRONG!!!

    I'M WRONG!!!!

    I'M WRONG!!!!!

    TRINA N.THOMAS-EADDY 07-04-10

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    Sx9 commented on WRONG

    10-09-2010

    IN DUE TIME,THIS IS LIFE AND ONCE MAY BE NEVER THIS WILL HAPPEN IN ONES LIFE,WHERE YOU SEE THE ILL AND STILL WANT SOME,,MAY BE ITS THE FIRE IN YOU OR YOUR SOUL,STRONG VIBES,,BUT IT HAPPEN,,
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/10/2010

    SO TRUE, BEING LED BY YOUR EMOTIONS CAN BE YOUR DOWNFALL AND THAT IS NOT SWEET. THANKS FOR READING AND COMMENTING......E

    shakeme4life commented on WRONG

    10-08-2010

    Great one , this one speaks to the disappointed abandoned girl in me ... it says love is scary , cause i know i must trust him with my life , heart , etc... thanks for sharing this tantilizing reproach of lust ...
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/09/2010

    THANKS. I REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR FEEDBACK. YOU OUT OF EVERYONE GOT IT! I CAN FEEL IT WE ARE ON THE SAME WAVELENGTH.

    sweetchinee commented on WRONG

    10-08-2010

    hmm... this doesn't sound like love at all... is it worth it in the end...is the big question here... beautifully written... i feel it!
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/19/2010

    No it's not love, it's lust. Lust is never worth it because it cools down and the fire of desire turns to anger. Thank you for reading and commenting...........E

    bforibus commented on WRONG

    10-08-2010

    an independce from pride. a great poem with lots of emotion. great job.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/19/2010

    Thanks for reading and commenting bforibus..........E

    smoothdame commented on WRONG

    10-08-2010

    Again great job I love the way you kept repeating I'm wrong because sometimes in love you know you shouldn't feel a certain way and yet you do because love isn't logical and you can't help who you love.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/09/2010

    SO TRUE! YOU MAY NOT BE ABLE TO HELP WHO YOU LOVE BUT YOU CAN CONTROL YOUR ACTIONS. THANKS SMOOTHDAME FOR READING AND COMMENTING......E

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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