Laughter

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Laughter

When it rains,
I remember
all the laughter
you created
as the images of your 
memory are resurrected
in my vision drop by drop.

In the downpour
I'm invaded
by the flavor
in the droplets
as I savor
all the succor
of your smile that remains
when they drop.

But the burden
they must carry
is less heavy
as I am seeing
that they founder 
and are hidden 
as tears of sugar
crashing against the levy
at the core
of my well being
as they pop.

Yet there I seek you
in those moments that are gone
and they pursue me in their falling
as I'm thinking that I'm fleeing,
but they continue
as I'm walking,
when I'm laughing
when I'm gasping,
when I'm crying;
when I can no
longer go
on,
and they don't stop.

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tierra7 commented on Laughter

12-29-2009

oooooh you made my heart melt...Maestro, your wife really brings out the best in you...God Bless You Both for sharin' this stolen moment with us...i display tears of joy for you love birds...Namaste.. Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/30/2009

Thank you for your most excellent review and visit kind Tierra!!!

lightcourier commented on Laughter

05-02-2009

I really liked the rhythmic meter of this piece with the drop drop pop stop. Sounded and felt like heavy raindrops. Excellent work. Thanks!

Grito

08/29/2009

Thank you very much Light!!

JadedJezzabel commented on Laughter

04-29-2009

i am inpressed. i like everything about this poem. u created a clear visual of truly missing someone

Grito

08/29/2009

Thank you most kind Jaded!!

AIXA commented on Laughter

04-27-2009

Together with an umbrella under the rain. How romantic!!!

Grito

08/29/2009

Muchos besos mi amor!!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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