MY BROKEN ROPE

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    MY BROKEN ROPE

    I stand alone, behind a blind sheet of glass,

    Stuck in a whirlpool, I’m bound by my cast,

    I am a leaf, blowing like a tumble weed,

    Living what I’ve sewed, bound by my seed,

    Engulfed in flames, my life is in turmoil,

    Poisoned is my plant, laid in this soil,

    Strong is the tiger, and loud is the lion,

    But scared is the weak, lost and dying,

    I stare at the heavens, and it seems right,

    But lost is the love, gone in the night,

    I’m an image, vanished in reflection,

    Which way to go, so many directions,

    Please give me faith, and show me hope,

    Hanging by a strand, from a broken rope.

     

    8/2/10 MULLIS

     

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    ShanneN commented on MY BROKEN ROPE

    08-02-2010

    here's what ya gotta do... 1.tie the rope in a knot. 2. fetch some duct tape. 3. cut a piece of tape about 3.14 feet long 4. wrap the tap tightly around the knot. 5. get a new rope because i doubt 1-4 would work. 6. talk to an awsome person, such as myself, and feel better. 7. be happy, and dont let anything bring you down. 8. dont let ANYONE upset you. 9. do whatcha gotta do, keep ya head up. 10. be a 10!, but for real, you did a good job with this. its deep. i liked it as a poem but i didnt like it only because of the fact that you sound down, dont be down, be a clown. =), great job!
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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