No Echos

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  • Sadness

    No Echos

    Reach deeply into the blood of my soul
    Such darkness there to control

    A crimson black wave amid the velvet sea
    And still that silent captured plea

    And there are no echos in an empty space
    The softest sound has no place

    The direction is unclear and left to the test
    To decide such a final best

    The gentleness sparkles amid fragments of glass
    And a damp mist shall rise at last

    A muffled sound beneath a veil of storms
    And nothing is warm...

    The tragic Summer's winter song
    But the notes have all gone...

    To the stars
    And the reaching out becomes too hard

    Survival amid the raging winds, no beginning again
    And perhaps not a friend to depend

    Drowning in the warm blood, the silent cries
    Of the careless tries and the empty eyes

    Drowning in silent blood, that stretches the years
    Over the many tears and the many fears

    Drowning in the reddest blood, that scars so deep
    The sleep is brief, there is no relief...

    -Spider

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    NayInLove commented on No Echos

    06-12-2009

    Spider, I really enjoyed reading this. It was almost as if I actually felt what you wrote. Great job girl!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    Spider’s Poems (24)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    No Echos 1
    Never Cry 0
    Quiet Tears 0
    Lost Soul 0
    The Answer 1
    The Game 1
    The Other One 0
    Things 0
    Game Over 0
    Beware the Black Widow 0
    Just Whisper 0
    My Love 1
    Cry Not Words 0
    That Day 1
    No Longer to Me 0
    Tunnel of Time 0
    Fragments 0
    Never Forgotten 0
    The Quiet Voices are Killing Softly 0
    In My Needing 0
    The Rose 1
    Nightmare 0
    No More Tears 1
    Forbidden Love 0