Withdrawal

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    Withdrawal
    She doesn't soothe half as much as she used to . . .
    Her curves are flattering.
    Something about the way she speaks is irresistable,
    Attraction is versatile.

    Rack my brain and bring on the nosebleeds 'cause I love the addicition.
    Complaints cease and happiness is the forenight's energy.
    Dropping like flies after the last line subcomes to memory.
    I alleviate my pain by the strokes,
    Wait for morning, another chance at striking out gracefully . . .
    Fate sealed indefinite.

    She doesn't soothe half as much as she used to . . .
    Her curves are flattering.
    Something about the way she speaks is irresistable,
    Attraction is versatile.

    I retire to a stale relationship, inspiration hard to come by
    'Cause they drain me.
    Circumstance hinders my attention span and her body's cold.
    Lifeless fingers engage this audible necrophilia,
    I call this hobby release.
    The short time inbetween the most intimate of affairs second to none,
    But the buzz wears thin . . .

    Non-responsive
    Until memory and THC argue me back to the drawing board,
    Torture I can endure until the makeup dries
    And I'm alive inside the arms of resurrection.
    You are the lover I've been expecting.

    She doesn't soothe half as much as she used to . . .
    Her curves are flattering.
    Something about the way she speaks is irresistable,
    Attraction is versatile.

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    LadyL714 commented on Withdrawal

    03-10-2009

    I liked the way you used parts of this poem repetitively as though it were a chorus in a song.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

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