CLOSE YOUR EYES, CAN YOU IMAGINE

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    CLOSE YOUR EYES, CAN YOU IMAGINE

     CLOSE YOUR EYES, CAN YOU IMAGINE...He is so thoughtful of a person..for example each day he makes sure he checks on me... and i mean on a constant...and as i wake , i quickly check his next great poetry piece of work...Always a new surprise ...checking for the sign in his rhymes...  CLOSE YOUR EYES CAN ,YOU IMAGINE...how it feels to be loved by me...to hold late night pillow talk conversation...or to lay me on your chest as i vent...to feel my soft breath hitting your neck...or the chills you get, when my energy surges up and down your body...  CLOSE YOUR EYES CAN ,YOU IMAGINE...Coming home to dinner prepared,two candles light,on cloth linen, and my best china presented...giving you my most sensual massage ,feeling all of your stress leave your body...from your head to your feet ,complete serenity...this is what our life could be...  CLOSE YOUR EYES CAN,YOU IMAGINE...When we spend time talking about our childhood and upbringing...when you get excited from my meaty cheeks jiggling...how my spirit visits you ,just to prove i miss you...when i hear our song ,i tear up with joy...  CLOSE YOUR EYES CAN,YOU IMAGINE...when i reveal slowly all my gifts inside...and our love is so strong ,we decide no longer can we reside...in different states , places ,or frame of minds...sometimes there isn't time to rewind...we must make the best of all of our precious time...  CLOSE YOUR EYES CAN,YOU IMAGINE...my king on his throne,and i your beautiful queen near by...letting our love intensify in the safety of our kingdom...those threatening storms/winds ...have turned to subtle,tranquil ,breezes ...as long as we are together...  CLOSE YOUR EYES CAN ,YOU IMAGINE...yes LOOK REAL GOOD...deep into my eyes...feel my love not my pride...as we coast along this life's long pleasure ride...seriously putting all bs to the side...you'll melt when you witness my grown and sexy stride...and with this i leave you to decide...when and where your destiny is located...tell me what does your soul see now...</p>

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    knight4696 commented on CLOSE YOUR EYES, CAN YOU IMAGINE

    10-31-2010

    Hey Rochelle - A very nice write. A beautiful romantic fairy tale. Keep up the great work! :) Ken
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    shakeme4life

    11/02/2010

    wow you took the time to go back to one of my early writes , i've got to read and pick your brain , thank you .

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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