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  • shakeme4life
  • Learn yourself, love yourself, and respect yourself! Your past is but on step towards your future.

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Praying for a love blessed from above ...

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When i get married , i'll know indeed,
my union will be blessed with spiritual seeds.
I prayed to my heavenly father to custom make me for you,
so remind me of this, each time, any other i try to pursue. 

I asked that you be strong , yet loving,
dependable , and caring.
I asked that your love for me ,
would grow stronger with each passing day.


I ask that your faith be so strong ,
nothing can break it .
Nothing could bring you down.


I prayed that  he'd send you with a renewed spirit 
and sound mind.
That he'd grant you the knowledge to
get us through our binds .


I prayed he'd endow you with a sense of humor,
so you won't get overloaded .
That he'd fill you with the power 
of the holy spirit.


I prayed he would give you just enough 
courage, to make sound fair decisions.
That you'd feel obligated to always
tell me the truth.


I prayed that he'd give you emotions , 
to feel my love , pain, joy.
and make you sensitive enough
to feel hurt when you hurt me.


I prayed he'd design you with enough room
to support & encourage me.
That you would always feel the need 
to take great care of me .


I prayed he'd bless you with the wisdom needed
to evade sinful temptations.
and to be sure of yourself , through out 
the doubting ,and hating .


I prayed he'd guide you as our head.
that he'd teach you to respect yourself 
and others.
that he'd make you faithful , 
and able to endure our storms.



I prayed he'd make you just empty enough , 
for only my love to fill .
and a deligent worker to pay our 
bills on time.


I prayed that he'd kiss you with a touch of 
romance . 
To show me you love me at your every
chance.
 

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ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Customed built

06-21-2011

You deserve this man! I loved your clarity and your dumping of emotion in this poem. It's like a wish list love letter for your meant to be partner. Good job!....E

shakeme4life

06/22/2011

Lol ,, you have learned me well , in this writing arena ... like i need every star to shine a little brighter , as they absorb my wishlist tonight...

gregster commented on Customed built

06-17-2011

nicely done hopefully you get that.do this though read simple love on my list..you might relate.

shakeme4life

06/17/2011

Simple love ... does it exist ... all my years ... lol ... thank you i'm gonna stop by and read it ...

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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