WHY I LOVE HIM

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    • shakeme4life
    • Learn yourself, love yourself, and respect yourself! Your past is but on step towards your future.

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    if you've ever enjoyed love's energy and ride .....then you'll love this

    WHY I LOVE HIM

    Why i love him the best .

    It's in the scent of his spirit 

    the sound of his joy

    it's the taste of his masculinity 

    and the size of his intelligence

    it's the feel of his imagination 

    during those rainy days 

    It's the strength of his foundation

    the size of his family structure 

    That leaves me anticipating marriage 

    It's the safe & sound protection he provides for me 

    that leaves me on solid ground 

    spiritual grounding that lifts my spirit high 

    it's his sensual aura that takes me on a exciting ride 

    It's why i love him so much .

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    JadedJezzabel commented on WHY I LOVE HIM

    01-30-2011

    very well put girl....you leave nothing out....you express exactly what it is in him that makes you love hom..........great write.
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    shakeme4life

    02/06/2011

    thanks , Jaded ....i thought let me write this down before i forget and become an ungrateful person .....

    NevillePark commented on WHY I LOVE HIM

    01-14-2011

    ............................. Good job sister ...................
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    KING commented on WHY I LOVE HIM

    01-11-2011

    I like your honesty in the poem. You are clear with your intentions to the point.
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    shakeme4life

    01/14/2011

    Thank you , this is my tribute to good men , potential good men , and future good men ..written in the style of my mentor Maya Angelou

    slimgoodwoody commented on WHY I LOVE HIM

    01-10-2011

    Excellent poem! I read honesty and truth in this poem! Good job!
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    shakeme4life

    01/10/2011

    TTHhhhhaaannnnkkkk uuuuuuuuuuuuu.......yes now trying to hold on to the truth of this feeling is another animal

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on WHY I LOVE HIM

    01-09-2011

    I love the sincerity and flow as well as the beautiful thoughts. Excellent write...............E
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    shakeme4life

    01/10/2011

    TTTTTTTTTTTTtthhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnkkkkkk youuuuu I-L-O-V-E-U-U-U...i appreciate you feedback means the world to me from a great poet ....

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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