My failure Demon

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    • shakeme4life
    • Learn yourself, love yourself, and respect yourself! Your past is but on step towards your future.

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    Never give up ....

    My failure Demon

     He's always there
    stalking me , encouraging my con's
    Leaving my pro's bare.

    He makes sure i fail
    is the sun out yet ?
    With him my dreams never sail.

    Constantly keeping me behind
    I'm the train's caboose
    like my troubles stay on automatic rewind

    Feeling like i'm on a esculator straight to hell
    I'm down for the count
    Where was my saved by the bell?

    Nothing stays down forever , right.
    Imma hold on to hope
    One day my goals will take flight.

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    bforibus commented on My failure Demon

    09-23-2010

    dark with a little light at the end of the tunnel. just the way i like it. great job
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    shakeme4life commented on My failure Demon

    09-18-2010

    Thank you , you're so sweet ,thoughtful... i will believe and i do believe that is true...
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on My failure Demon

    09-14-2010

    You will reach the highest heights! Not by anyone else's measuring stick only your own, you will forge a path of success all your own.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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