Gone Away

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  • My Feelings

    Gone Away

    Gone are the years

    Gone are the wings

    All that is left are broken dreams and wistful wishes

    The voices of an angel are singing for you

    No harpsichord or melody could be so bittersweet

    There is no other way to live or be

    Dream big and hope that you are

    A star to the calling

    A star in the making

    A shining star for all eternity

    Voices in the head aching so bad

    It makes the ears bleed

    Away, away

    No more hoping

    No more wishing on a shooting star

    It's all coming true

    and soon you will see...

    A dream

    A reality that once was a fantasy...

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    Savant commented on Gone Away

    10-29-2009

    This piece offers hope but I was a little confused in the beginning. Overall the idea I get is that dreams can come true in real life and not like a fairy tale or happily ever after, but a real dream, a real calling. Thanks for sharing.
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    dumplin commented on Gone Away

    10-24-2009

    I love the harpsichord! Nicely worded! I loved this piece.
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    cliftondurant commented on Gone Away

    10-20-2009

    it's good to dream because dreams do come true if you beleive and i beleive how about you nice job
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