I Am (Part II)

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I Am (Part II)

 

I have no fear

 

I have no shame

 

I am a shining star

 

Looking to break down walls

 

And tear down any that stand in my way

 

My calling is to teach, but I hear a voice saying preach

 

 

 

People tell me to speak up

 

Stand your ground

 

When all around

 

I feel I am a burden

 

Always surgin'

 

Always goin'

 

Still hangin' on

 

 

 

I am what I am

 

So let me be

 

When I am too quiet

 

It causes a fright

 

When I am too loud

 

It cause a frown

 

I am what I am

 

So let me be

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Kingwebstar commented on I Am (Part II)

06-07-2012

I have like and dislikes of this poem. First the like I agree with you 100 percent and I encourage you to be you.You are a wonderful poetess . Now the dislike .This poem is so small I could barely read it lol. Love Da KinG

Mrpoetry commented on I Am (Part II)

06-24-2010

good poem ......................... and keep writing always be true to you

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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