Lay Down

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    Lay Down
    Im turning numb
    Eyes fear the sun
    Rotting in this house alone,
    This concrete womb...
    Its door has become my stone
    I lay entombed...

    I drink my fill
    Feed myself guilt
    In this solitairy cage I made,
    These chains I bare...
    Myself whom I cant escape,
    Yet I dont seem to care...

    By the way, do I need to pray?
    My lazy mind procrastinates...
    But someday soon I'll be okay
    It just wont be today...

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    raggedypoet commented on Lay Down

    04-06-2009

    I liked this poem!! Very nicely written! ~Sara
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    maryann72961 commented on Lay Down

    03-04-2009

    ahh the struggle for change, only to be put off another day.. well expressed and written
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