Hypnotized

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  • Lost Love

    Hypnotized

    Watchin' you as you sway
    Bits at a time, you fade away
    And I have tried everything
    Just to end this suffering

    You dont care how I feel
    Non of what I say is real
    But if it ain't, than what am I
    Your comforter, your aliby?

    Our memory
    Will fade away
    Piece by piece
    Day by day
    You dont mind
    And I dont care
    Next time you'l grind
    I wont be there

    Are you aware, are you awake
    Repeating all of your mistakes
    Im all that you could ever need
    A gentle hand, a heart that bleeds

    Do I mean as much to you
    As much as you claim I do?
    Cuz if I do, I need to know
    I need to see, you need to show.

    Im crawling back To where I lay
    Piece by piece Day by day
    No longer blind Im well aware
    Spent too much time
    Trapped in your stare

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    Cindy80 commented on Hypnotized

    09-29-2009

    you have wrote a very beauitful piece of work here... keep doing what you are doing... I wish you good luck

    trocka7 commented on Hypnotized

    07-11-2009

    This is a great one, loved the last two lines especially!

    Seosev commented on Hypnotized

    05-14-2009

    Rainz, I really liked it..you caught me at the end..bamb!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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