Fault

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Fault

So much time has come and gone
So many things been said and done
And Im still here
So much pain, my souls adorned 
Scars - mementos, always worn
And Im still here
And I still smile despite it all
Learn from every time I fall
And Im still here
I may limp, but I stand tall
Even with the miles I've crawled
And Im still here
For one to heal, then one must learn
To read through lies
For one to feel, then one must purge
Pain inside
I've let you in one time before 
Then once again I've opened doors
And Im still here
I asked for truth, you lied some more
You haven't changed, same as before
And Im still here
Time to move and cut the loss
Heart still strong, though double crossed
Cuz Im still here
It wont be me who pays the cost
For all that you could have is lost
Look in the mirror

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FindingJune commented on Fault

10-17-2009

GREAT! I am the only comment...I can't copy everyone else...lol. I like this piece, but with stronger word choices, this could be soooo much better.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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