Drown The Hero

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Drown The Hero

This is a P.S.A,

A polite suggestion:

The road to hell is paved

With good intentions

Ya thought you felt no pain...

Yeah, well here's a lesson

One that wont go away

One that is lasting!

 

Its great to see how you have finally fallen

They took your grace and sent you crashing down

Scent of blood, the vultures hear the calling

You know the implications are profound, profound!

 

Yeah, they can see you falling - your enemies surround 

And you know they're coming  - to kick you when your down

Can you hear them calling - "Drown the hero now!"

 

Never thought you'd live to see this moment

Bloodied, broken, helpless, left face down

Seems like you have picked the wrong opponent

And no one's here to save you from the crowd, the crowd!

 

Yeah, they can see you falling - Your enemies surround 

And you know they're coming  - To kick you when your down

Can you hear them calling - "Drown the hero now!"

 

Always there for everyone

Always there for those in need

And now its you who needs someone

They’re all around to watch you bleed, now bleed!

 

Yeah, they can see you falling - Your enemies surround 

And you know they're coming  - To kick you when your down

Can you hear them calling - "Drown the hero now!"

 

So wheres your hero now?

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FindingJune commented on Drown The Hero

10-17-2009

This just begs to be read aloud in a dark, smokey place where all that can be seen is you....well done!

Gracey commented on Drown The Hero

07-17-2009

:O brilliant. It left me with goose bumps. Powerful ending. I like thiss

Rainz

07/19/2009

Thank you much

lustfulsoul commented on Drown The Hero

07-11-2009

Wow! This is so deep, so dark! You did a wonderful job! .

Rainz

07/19/2009

thank you :)

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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