Wrongs to Rights

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    Wrongs to Rights

    Wait...
    Just a minute...
    Cant you see that you are wrong?
    Late...
    Time to pivot...
    Turn around and make yourself gone

    Cold...
    Dark and lonely...
    Its the path you chose to tread
    Old...
    Stale and molding...
    Not alive, you dwell with the dead

    By the time you realize
    That your soul is paralyzed
    It will be too late to try
    To change all your wrongs to rights
    Your lies...

    Fate...
    Just a whisper...
    Just an echo passing you by
    Irate...
    You wont listen
    Concentrate on staying high

    Gone...
    Is innocence...
    Now the change is all complete
    Dumb...
    So ignorant...
    Runnin blind to your defeat

    By the time you realize
    That your soul is paralyzed
    It will be too late to try
    To change all your wrongs to rights
    Your lies...

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    babyfire04 commented on Wrongs to Rights

    05-14-2009

    Great Job, I really like how you break up your lines.

    valelisha commented on Wrongs to Rights

    04-28-2009

    I like it. Written from the heart.

    Kelstorm commented on Wrongs to Rights

    04-27-2009

    Insightful. I like your experimentation with strucutre

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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