Lost

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  • Confusion
    • travisd76
    • Been on a hiatus for awhile, but I'm back and have the itch to write some poetry.

    Lost

    lost in the darkness
    I find it hard to see
    lost in your touch
    I find it hard to breath
    lost in your arms
    is where I want to be
    lost in your love
    I never want to leave
    lost in your thoughts
    each night and every day
    lost in translation
    of words I'd like to say
    lost are the memories
    of moments gone and passed
    lost are the questions 
    I never got to ask
    lost is the time
    and things I'd like to do
     lost is my mind
    just thinking of you
    I'm lost

     

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Lost

    10-05-2010

    It is very cool and well written. I think I feel lost all the time especially with love.
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    vanessa411 commented on Lost

    06-25-2009

    this is a great poem, ive been here before... i have afew poems of my own like this:( ROCK ON!!!
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    tenderpoison commented on Lost

    06-07-2009

    you have an honest simplicity in the way you write that not only communicates your emotions, but touches those of your readers as well...who hasn't felt this way, but you make it new. your writing is powerful, in a subtle, unexpected way.."I'm lost"...that will stay with me, because I feel it too.
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    jademelissa74 commented on Lost

    06-01-2009

    Another great piece. Keep up the good imagery in your poems. You paint the picture well. I have enjoyed reading this poem :))
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    travisd76

    06/02/2009

    Thank you so much for your wonderful comments.

    forbiddenlove commented on Lost

    06-01-2009

    This is a great poem. Can fit to almost any situation. I am in a situation right now where love is great between me and my lover, but because of our situation i know our love will be lost.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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