When

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    • travisd76
    • Been on a hiatus for awhile, but I'm back and have the itch to write some poetry.

    When

    when will it happen
    that miracle I seek
    when will I meet the one
    who's loving, kind, and meek
    maybe she's out there
    and wondering the same
    looking for the right man
    for whom she'll take his name

     

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    tenderpoison commented on When

    06-07-2009

    when God wills it, that's when. and now I've to fill up the 100 character requirement...well written, I love how these short works of yours cut right to the chase, you say what you have to say and then you're done...what is it they say? brevity is the soul of discretion? well done

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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