Presumptuous

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    • travisd76
    • Been on a hiatus for awhile, but I'm back and have the itch to write some poetry.

    Presumptuous

    it seems I was presumptuous
    and even dared assume
    that the person you were speaking to
    was standing in this room
    this room where only I reside
    alone with all my thoughts
    where I let my feelings hide
    from all the pain I’ve wrought
    I was caught up in emotion
    because it sounded so sublime
    I didn’t really stop to think
    and I put my heart out on the line
    I thought I could be your lighthouse
    In your sea of salty tears
    and you could be my savior
    and subdue all my fears
    but it seems I misread the words
    you put so well to rhyme
    it’s too bad we didn’t meet before
    some other place some other time
    I thought you were an addict
    to the words in which I write
    and that in all your darkness
    perhaps I was some light
    that I might be that person
    that you were longing for
    and the one that you were talking to
    when you said you wanted more
    so I’m sorry I misunderstood
    your desperate passion plea
    I guess it was make believe
    and it wasn’t meant for me
    I hope you aren’t uncomfortable
    and that we can still be friends
    who knows what our futures hold
    and just where it is we’ll end

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    tenderpoison commented on Presumptuous

    06-23-2009

    always my friend we must write for ourselves...this is excellent and I know, from your heart. I know you didn't see yourself as a poet...but you are. and a very talented one at that. 10 from me

    jademelissa74 commented on Presumptuous

    06-22-2009

    A passionate, emotional piece! You paint the picture clearly. The reader is able to gather the thrill and emotions within! A brave subject to write! I love it! Thank you for sharing it!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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