Take the Time

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  • travisd76
  • Been on a hiatus for awhile, but I'm back and have the itch to write some poetry.

Take the Time

I got up early this morning
and I took a look around
I saw things I’d never seen before
as well as unheard sounds
I heard the sound of silence
not corrupted yet by man
I saw the beauty of a sunrise
as it reached across the land
I sat and watched the chipmunks
as they scurried ‘round the tree
 I even heard the steady buzz
of a big old bumblebee
I saw myself a hummingbird
that hovered in mid air
almost like the hand of God
had somehow placed it there
I heard the birds talk back and forth
like they’re the best of friends
who hadn’t got a chance to talk
since gosh, I don’t know when
I saw the beauty of the flowers
for the first time in years
I picked some for my mother’s grave
and watered them with tears
I saw the color blue
like I’d never seen before
It used to be the way I felt
but now it’s so much more
like the color of a robin’s eggs
or a light blue summer’s sky
the color of a singing Jay
or my daughter’s twinkling eyes
things that stand for goodness
things really quite sublime
but these things, they were always there
I just never took the time

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latinangel commented on Take the Time

06-29-2009

AWwwwwww travis I think this is beautiful. The only thing I find that takes away from your poem is that the way you put it on the page seems to run together making a little hard to follow. But your words are very touching and filled with wonderful imagery that makes me feel like I just lived that moment. Great job. Latin Angel

travisd76

06/29/2009

Thanks. I don't know what happened with it running together like that. I wrote it out and it was on individual lines, but then when I submitted it, it ended up all mushed together. And I can't fix it for like 7 days. Sucks to break a string of all 10's over that

WordSlinger commented on Take the Time

06-25-2009

Wonderful, I bet your happy you took the time. This is what life's about precious things like this, you got it Travis, keep your fire going, :) 10

castlemist commented on Take the Time

06-25-2009

As I read through your work, i can see you getting better all the time. This is really good! Jerry

vanessa411 commented on Take the Time

06-25-2009

THIS IS MAGNIFICENT! it was a picture in my mind!!!! Beautiful!

StandingBear commented on Take the Time

06-24-2009

An awesome, beautiful .. deep heart felt write of the love of your mother. When you hear the wind blowing it is your mother's loving spirit .. whispering that she will always be with you. Great dedication write.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

travisd76’s Poems (44)

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A Christmas for Mom 0
I Think of You 1
The Seasons of Love 4
A View From Afar 2
Ghost 5
A Dream Lost at Sea 5
Life 2
Take the Time 8
Left Unsaid 1
Presumptuous 2
Close Your Eyes and Leap 2
The Caterpillar 3
My Brother's Keeper 1
What is Normal 1
The Blind Man 2
Nice Guys Finish Last 1
I Saw You Today 1
A Whisper 2
Raindrops 4
A Life Less Ordinary 1
A Poet's Soul 3
Oh Little Frog 2
Take a Joke 3
Stuck in Neutral 1
Wishing Well 1
Unsaid 2
Why Try 3
Damaged Goods 1
Little Things 1
When 1
Work 1
Precious Kylee 1
Little Hands 2
Somwhere in the Darkness 1
Reasons 2
The Chase 4
Driving in Circles 1
One True Friend 4
My Life 1
Lost 5
My Girl 1
Numb is the Love 1
Mom's Poem 5