Never Rains But It Pours

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Suiting the mood of a typical winter depression..

Never Rains But It Pours

Reach out my hand to touch the wind of change
Close my eyes with my head back
To let it take me wherever its going
Shadows pass over my eyelids

Layed out flat on the oceans tides come the right time
Washed up on the shore of every coastline
To taste the sands of unknown destinations

Snowflakes coming down like pecks on my cheek
Pure white skies seeping into my bones
With a flare of light gone, but not forgotten

Fall back to the care such fragile whims
Whipping me back like the current always does
A river’s voice so passive yet persistent

Evaporated fragments returning to their cycle
Kidnapped particles of my being ascending with them
Only to come crashing down beneath the drops of rain

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kkirkwood commented on Never Rains But It Pours

05-14-2013

very good imagery really enjoyed the style and rhythm

irielove commented on Never Rains But It Pours

01-30-2010

your words...oh ur words...have brought forth intense emotions just as a perfect poem should be!!! kudos!!!

normroxursox

01/30/2010

Thank you very much!

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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