Confusion to Anger to Madness, or Last Words of The Loveless

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    Confusion to Anger to Madness, or Last Words of The Loveless

     What should I write?
    What should I say?
    Just give me the words,
    So you don't keep walking way!
    Please don't say you no longer love me!
    Please don't write you no longer care!
    How will I ever be complete,
    When your no longer there?
    This house is so empty!
    This home is so bare!
    Never to feel any more loving!
    But hell do you really care?
    Give me gasoline and matches
    Going to burn it to the ground!
    This building is so useless!
    So pathetic and nothing with you not around!
    Go off and leave me for another!
    I hope he treats you the same way!
    Then you can be left with the same confusion turning to anger!
    As you left me with that day!
    Burn baby, just burn!
    Leave nothing to be saved!
    As I stand choking within the fire!
    Leave nothing for the grave!
    These are the last words of the loveless!
    The blames burns my skin as the smoke stings my eyes!
    Crying not of pain but madness!
    How is this for goodbyes?

    D.B. Johnson

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    twise commented on Confusion to Anger to Madness, or Last Words of The Loveless

    02-05-2010

    I really like this poem, you are a great writer. Good work. I think everyone can relate to these kind of feelings, we have all had bad relationships that end in betrayal and unfaithfulness. Life sucks and so do most relationships, what do ya do??? Pull yourself back up to be kicked back down by someone else!!! People are brutal beings and being at the mercy of another human being that is so cruel and torturous sucks ass!
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    DBJohnson

    02/05/2010

    Whats funny is I wrote this today sitting in a office, and imagined a man as he decends from confusion towards and then into madness over the end of a relationship. This is actually one where the character decides to commit suicide but doing in a way to send a huge a dramatic message. So in a sense its a very short story or narrative so to speak.

    SBOYD commented on Confusion to Anger to Madness, or Last Words of The Loveless

    02-05-2010

    I LIKE THIS POEM....THATS HOW ALOT OF RELATINSHIP END OUT.....
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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