Uncertian Future

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    Uncertian Future

    The stress is more then I can take
    Living in a artificial place
    The burden is to heavy a load to bare
    Tracing the lines upon our face
    Where are we running to
    Whats the purpose of the race
    If there no chance for victory
    Does that make us a disgrace

    I have to concede
    Maybe your parents where right
    All this stuff we went through
    Was the reason that we fight
    If I made better choices
    We wouldn't be worried here tonight
    Yes I want revenge as well
    But it won't ease our problems using spite

    You have a just reason being scared
    Raw emotions feeling bare
    Life kicked kicked bloody
    No I agree it's not fair
    Manipulated and used
    As if based on a personal dare
    Cold we where betrayed
    No they do not care

    Running and searching
    Trying to tie up loose ends
    Even though we feel alone
    Let us not forget our friends
    Will we make it
    Not sure I guess it depends
    On the decisions we make
    All thats certian is its to late to make amends

    Time is confusing
    Our direction is unknown
    To late to be fixed
    The time for that has taken off and flown
    We cant not be to proud
    Even though we want to make it on our own
    We need to listen and use the advice given
    Maybe then our path will be shown

    D.B. Johnson

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    countryman commented on Uncertian Future

    01-26-2010

    I liked it but it missed a space of understanding I was with you but you lost me. Maybe its me but I liked it anyway it rhymed.

    NayInLove commented on Uncertian Future

    02-24-2009

    lots of emotion nicely done :)

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    DBJohnson’s Poems (43)

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    Desire 0
    My Son (Jack) 0
    To All My Brothers (Family) In Arms 0
    Abuse 1
    AMERICAN MEN 0
    Friendly Questions 0
    Tree 0
    Love On A Evil Mind 1
    Beaten Boxer 0
    Terror In my Dreams 0
    Confusion Or Love 0
    A Divorced Fathers Worries 0
    Cleaning Up After Lifes Mess 0
    Truth of a American Working Man 0
    Father Of Nothing 0
    Better Then Me 0
    End of a Relationship = Death 0
    Writing 0
    Christmas Without My Family 0
    Lost It All 0
    Final Words 2
    Marriage, A Prison Sentence? 1
    Cold Lonely Night 0
    Self Questioning 0
    A True Poet 0
    Writing- My Safe Haven 1
    Military Funeral 3
    Stormy Emotions 2
    Uncertian Future 2
    Soldiers Wife 4
    History 2
    Mother and Child 2
    Written Friend 1
    Romeo's Juliet 1
    Loss 5
    A Little Boy's Search For Understanding 1
    Showdown To Battle 1
    First Time Making Love 4
    Stormy Emotions 8