Final Words

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    Final Words

     A stolen kiss
    As soft as a babies breath
    A perfect moment
    To face before death
    A salty tear
    Rolls down your face
    The time is close
    I can leave this place
    Please dont worry
    The time is right
    I lived a good life
    I am leaving it behind tonight
    Please dont be sad
    Please try not to cry
    I am at peace
    I am prepared to die
    I wasnt perfect
    I tried my best
    Place a picture of my family
    Upon my chest
    They are in my heart
    I love them so
    They are the last thing on my mind
    It's time to go

    D.B. Johnson

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    DBJohnson commented on Final Words

    02-05-2010

    However I guess the way I wrote this, its the reader that gets to decide the meaning. So in a sense it can be about any form of death including suicide.
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    twise

    02/05/2010

    I guess I had it all wrong, my interpritaion of this poem was that of a person that was at peace with his or her descision to take their own life. Know that I know the true meaning of the poem I like it even more.

    twise commented on Final Words

    02-05-2010

    I really like poems about suicide. I am a little morbid I guess, I loved this poem. You have a great way of writing and expressing to the reader excatly how you feel at that moment. I have been reading through your peoms and you are really good.
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    DBJohnson

    02/05/2010

    Actually this a poem of a man dieing of cancer, saying good bye to his family. In a sense it is a form of emotional suicide but the subject herein the poem is at peace in dieing, after suffering for so long the effects of cancer. What I am actually trying to impart though is his last thoughts as he speaks his last words in saying goodbye.

    DBJohnson

    02/05/2010

    No you didnt have it wrong again its called interpritation, you read it as you felt it. Nothing wrong with that. Personally I enjoy the fact it left people wondering I guess. If your forced to ask questions or it makes a statement it still left its mark. Is that not the making of a good poem? Don't fprget to different people poems can tell different stories to..

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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