Stormy Emotions

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    Stormy Emotions
    Life like the wind is it blows
    Deep in my mind it snows
    Heavy dewed hearted with all my thoughts
    Tears dried up within the droughts
    Whirl wind losing someone on whom you depend
    Stormy it has come to a end

    How could you have done this
    Those nasty things you did and said
    We could have made it better
    But you chose hurt us instead
    You lied and you cheated
    You tore this thing apart
    Your actions really stunned us
    Like a arrow through the heart

    Angry here comes the rain
    Flooding deep within the pain
    Lightening eluminates the night
    Thunder clasp a jump in fright
    Hailing at the loss of you
    Sunshine wont make the sky turn blue

    How could of you have done this
    Those nasty things you did and said
    We could have made it better
    But you chose to hurt us instead
    You lied and you cheated
    You tore this thing apart
    Your actions really stunned us
    Like a arrow through the heart

    Mud slides have taken away
    Rainbows for a brighter new day
    Sleet has turned your heart cold
    Freezing emotions have made us really old
    Slight mist oh crap hear comes the tears
    Maybe a hurricane will to forget you through the years

    How could have you done this
    Those nasty things you did and said
    We could have made it better
    But you chose to hurt us instead
    You lied and you cheated
    You tore this thing apart
    Your actions really stunned us
    Like a arrow through the heart
    Just know we don't need you
    It's better off this way
    Those stormy emotions
    Will follow you through your days

    D.B. Johnson

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    desperado commented on Stormy Emotions

    02-03-2010

    you write great poetry and I can really tell that you have been through a lot of pain.I hope your pain gets better as life goes on, as I have been through a lot as well I get very depressed just pray that we will all have a brighter future. Desperado
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    countryman commented on Stormy Emotions

    01-26-2010

    Not bad I liked that better than the other one I just read keep up the good work not the nasty work.
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    Jaycee commented on Stormy Emotions

    06-26-2009

    Another great poem. You have either had some training in poetry writing or you have read a lot of poetry. I like the use of refrain and the end rhyme. And I love poems that leave a question in the reader's mind--at first I thought that when you said "you chose to hurt us" you meant you and your love. But, then, in the last stanza, you write "Just know we don't need you". Is the "we" you and a child? Great poem, great ending. Oh, my favorite line is "Slight mist oh crap hear comes the tears" the word play with the word "hear" is very clever, those kind of tears really can be heard. May God bless you as your tears disappear
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    LonelyHeart commented on Stormy Emotions

    02-23-2009

    The emotion just floods out of this.Great job DB.Hope you are ok......
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    ladymustang611 commented on Stormy Emotions

    02-23-2009

    You hit the nail on the head dude!!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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