Ode to My Best Friend

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  • viejay04
  • I would like to thank everyone for reading my poems and for giving me positive feedbacks! You guys keep me more inspired! I thank you all with all my heart! =)

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This poem is for my best friend, my twin soul, Diana Camille L. Layag!

Ode to My Best Friend

As I awake this morning
I've realized why God put us apart
...it's not only to test our friendship
and know how far it'll go,
but it's for us to realize
how much we've grown
and how much our friendship could endure;
how much we're willing to give and sacrifice...
and it's for us to realize how much "you"
and how much "me",
and how much "us"
really mean to us!!


I love you too much
and i can't bear
to lose you in this lifetime..
not now...
not tomorrow..
not ever!!

people wouldn't understand
the kind of friendship we have
nor dare to care...
(well who cares if they don't, anyway??)


Best friend, if I were a boy,
you surely are the luckiest girl in the world
and definitely the most special woman in my life,
but I may never be the boy I wish I could be for u, 
I know that I can be the
"best" friend you can ever have
in this life
forever!!!

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BikemanRJ commented on Ode to My Best Friend

03-13-2010

Some friends are a one in a million and you have expressed that here. I know what you mean by people not being able to understand or care about this type of a relationship. Great Poem Thank You God Bless bikemanRJ

viejay04

03/14/2010

Thanks bikemanRJ! You are definitely right! Not everyone can understand this type of relationship. and I'm grateful that you do understand what i'm trying to convey in here. God bless and thanks for reading =)

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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