A Child Called "It"

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    I've read this book 4 years ago..

    A Child Called "It"
    I've read this book A Child Called "It"
    So frustrating, so mean, and full of hate
    I felt sorry for the child called "It"
    Let's give him a name and call him David.

    Every word his mother tells him
    I feel hurt because she's so mean
    How come she's doing this to "It"
    Doesn't she realize "It" loves her?

    "Maybe mother is just in a bad mood today"
    That's all "It" can ever say
    "It" wanted to show his love for her
    But all she says is "It, just go away!"

    I read this book about a child called "It"
    So frustrating, so mean, and full of hate
    I felt really really sorry for the child called "It"
    David, I want you to know I'm just here for you
    You can count on me and get a big hug, too!

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    kage commented on A Child Called "It"

    03-12-2010

    again just a fine poem you have a softness to you that penetrates the peper you write on it is easy to see your softness in your words
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    viejay04

    03/13/2010

    thanks again kage =)

    karix13 commented on A Child Called "It"

    03-11-2010

    I love this poem! I agree with cousinsoren. He said almost everything for me. You should share this with the world to raise awarness to child abuse. 10!
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    viejay04

    03/11/2010

    I can't think of any other way to share this poem but through in this poetry site. Thank you for your appreciation! It means a lot! :) I'm hoping that despite the simplicity of this poem, others would get a grand lesson out of it.

    cousinsoren commented on A Child Called "It"

    03-11-2010

    This narrtaive poem speak for thousands of thousands of children who are either negleccted, or Adults (usually parents) fail to devote premium time and caring to listen to them. The style is almost flawless, and the last two lines are a demonstration of how a child shoukl be treated. For its didactic quality and almost flawless composition, my rating is10.
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    viejay04

    03/11/2010

    I thank you from the bottom of my heart, cousinsoren ^_^

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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