People are Like Computers When In Love

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    On my way home from work, I was on the train and a guy who was sitting beside me was playing with his laptop…his notebook suddenly froze and then died out…he couldn’t turn it on anymore…I told him maybe because of low battery…he said no…Then a sudden realization hits me…

    People are Like Computers When In Love

    People are like computers…

    In every decision they make,

    They have to be careful in uploading a data…

    Same goes when falling in love…

    Before installing a new program,

    Be patient and think loads of times

    if you really need it or not…

    there’s always a 50/50 case…

    It’s either it’ll give you virus

    Or will be useful to you…

    Do it slowly

    Step by step

    One at a time

    No rushing required

    Follow the instructions

    Don’t do it excitedly.

    When the program doesn’t work properly

    Uninstall the program immediately

    Let it go if the virus spread

    There’s always time for the cleaning

    Just don’t allow the system to be ruined

    Coz once it is ruined

    There’s a very low chance

    For the system to work properly again…

    If you know that you already have the virus…

    it’s time for a clean-up…

    bEfore iT ruins your sYstem..




    You think you already have the virus?

    …uninstaLL tHe pRogRam NOW…

    ...while you still have time.

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    jtlove commented on People are Like Computers When In Love

    07-10-2010

    Virus? Being in love isn't the virus it's being in lust and please uninstall before infection. Damn shame but it must be done and done quickly!
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    karix13 commented on People are Like Computers When In Love

    04-09-2010

    This poem is amazing! It's words ring true, as for both lovers and computers, you must tell them everything in a way and language they understand.
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    BikemanRJ commented on People are Like Computers When In Love

    04-07-2010

    Neat thought process had to read a couple of times to enjoy the read. There is a 50/50 chance that I would like this poem I tried not to get to excited before I decided. . BuT hEy I aLwAys EnJoY rEaDing YoUr WoRk God Bless you even if now I have a virus lol Randy
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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