I Miss Love

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  • viejay04
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I wrote this poem on April 6, 2008...

I Miss Love

I miss being in love.
I miss dating the love of my life.
I miss cuddling, kissing, and sweet talks.
I miss exchanging love letters
and I even miss talking at night
and him singing a lullaby song
till I fall asleep without even saying goodbye.

I miss being hugged, being kissed,
and being told that I’m the love of his life.
I miss being held to his chest
So tight that I’m almost out of air.
I miss playing games, making silly looking faces, and teasing him.

I miss the fights, the arguments,
And the scoldings when we’re both mad.
I miss the tears that fall from my eyes
when he’s hurting my feelings too much.
I miss him running to me and hugging me
While saying “I’m sorry, baby”.
I miss being kissed all over my face
Till he gets to hear that I have already forgiven him.

I miss watching movies with him.
I miss the scene where I will lay my head on his shoulder
As he secretly smells my hair and telling me I smell so nice.
I miss shedding a tear because of the sad part of the movie 
As he laughs at me for being too emotional.
I miss poking him and telling him to leave me alone.

I miss walking hand in hand with him;
I miss the feeling that he’s the only one existing and no one else.
I miss him telling me silly jokes
While both of us are laughing.

I miss sitting on the bench and watching the sunset.
I miss him laying his head on my lap
And I, running my fingers through his hair.
I miss talking and reminiscing with him.
I miss discussing future plans with him.
I miss the way we tell each other
How we both enjoyed our day together.

I miss us parting our separate ways.
I miss the sad face we’re both showing
That we will surely miss each other.
I miss saying our goodbyes while hugging so tight.
I miss him kissing me so tenderly 
As he makes me feel so good inside.
I miss him pinching my cheek and telling me
“I will miss you, baby”.
I miss walking away then turning my head
And run back to him to get my last real goodbye kiss.

I miss missing him;
I miss Mr. Love.
I miss loving a person with all my heart
And I miss being loved even more.

I will not look for him…
but I’ll patiently wait for him.
I know he will come for me.
I know he will…
Yes, he will!

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goldygirl commented on I Miss Love

03-06-2010

Very good one! I like this one alot! especially the last 2 cuplets/stanzas

viejay04

03/06/2010

Thanks so much, goldygirl ;) you are Gold indeed ^_^v peace and love -viejay04

prophesy commented on I Miss Love

03-03-2010

how wonderful this gift of love. you are love, both woman and man. continue this journey of love. you are a true poet from heart./the prophesy

viejay04

03/03/2010

Aww! Thanks for those wonderful words! ^_^

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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