Blood and Tears

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    well i wrote this poem....when i was just thinking......well enjoy

    Blood and Tears

    The blood I shed

    when I cut

    is because of you

    you left me with suicide

    and now I want to

    be with you.

     

    The tears I shed

    when I think of the past

    is because of you

    those aren't tears of joy

    they're of sorrow

    but they will soon end.

     

    Sometimes the tears

    turn to blood

    because of the pain

    you caused

    I can't wipe away these tears

    but soon I will be tearless in the ground.

     

    Soon I will be with you

    down below

    where you can wipe away my tears

    and stop the blood

    just keep looking up for me

    “for I will be with you soon.”

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    leigh14 commented on Blood and Tears

    10-24-2010

    O_O wow! that is all i can say! it is sad that one so young has been through the things that would cause this kind of outpouring from the heart. but i do say that if you ever need to talk i am here... i can imagine the pain and if i am right on what this is about then i can tell you how i was able to cope... my Best guy friend committed suicide and i wrote a poem and dedicated it to him, it is titled My best friend... im creaive huh... but this is about you not me... theree was much emotion put into this poem and these are the kind i like to see, they project the person who writes them, not always what the reader wants but they are unique in that sense... great write. Leigh
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    winterkou commented on Blood and Tears

    09-21-2010

    a sad look at love and loss, dark write, overall nice write
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    Chaos128 commented on Blood and Tears

    09-20-2010

    A winding trip through darkness and despair, with cobwebs and everything; and rooms best not entered. You can spin a tale, Sk8ter *o*
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    LadyLuck commented on Blood and Tears

    09-20-2010

    Just what the doctor ordered! Its Dark in the whole entirety of the word. Dismal and dreary, sad the pain radiated through the poem is enough to make past wound open their red mouths and breathe deep Favorite!
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