Crying a River of Pain

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    Crying a River of Pain

    It’s a good thing to have

    A good cry

    I’m crying a river of pain

    My Muse

    My turmoil of mental madness

    Is in pain

    Lost in the rain

    I make him insane

    My feelings don’t matter

    Not aloud to feel

    I’m lost

    Cold

    Crying in the rain

    Silently crying a river of pain

    Going insane

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    gogant commented on Crying a River of Pain

    06-04-2010

    I hope the dam doesn't burst......with all that crying, and raining too, could bring a flood that may drown the pain..............You do make music with your musing.......................................gogant
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    bluskyinthenite

    06/04/2010

    ha ha ha thanks gogant.. thank you for reading my write..

    lonewolf commented on Crying a River of Pain

    05-22-2010

    Life isnt about waiting for the storm to pass. It's learning to dance in the rain. Very well written.
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/23/2010

    Thank you very much for reading my poems... I love to dance in the rain.... nude @ that Ha.. Its my birthday and feeling sassy

    mustascheman commented on Crying a River of Pain

    05-10-2010

    It's sad how pain can be so painful. Although I'm not sure where the pain is coming from. I just hope you have enough tissue..good write. A.T.
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/10/2010

    he he yes thanks good morning World

    alb29oclfl commented on Crying a River of Pain

    05-08-2010

    loving makes us all a little insane, nice flow and i cry in the rain to
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/08/2010

    Thanks... much appreciated

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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