Echo's threw my mind

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Echo's threw my mind

Echo's
Through my mind
Echoing, the end of another word in time.
Raping itself around my hollow mind
Holding me tight
I struggle to fight
I so want to take Flight
Sail back into the mind of eternal rhyme
Perpetual echo's of time
Appeal to the sight and mind
Whats the meaning, of sound, and rhythm.
Similar comparison.
From you I
Do I rhyme
Singing a song of
Metaphor
Simile
Echo of images
Painting of sounds
Everlasting Sites within my mind
Intense personal emotion
Echo's through my mind
Hollow and empty
Echoing
through
the chambers of
 my
Mind
Echo
infinite duration
of time
echoing

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knight4696 commented on Echo's threw my mind

04-02-2010

Blue - quite the introspective poem you penned here. I read it twice ... Much to ponder here. I enjoy poems that make me think! Great job! :) Ken

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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